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scattered by solstice wind...................sorties made to ordinals,
quartered, drawn..................................quandaries born
umbrageless, .......................................ululating,
eager, lambent.....................................ermine-draped....
adroitly...................................................anaesthetised
lathered..................................................lolling
.............................wanton and wiggly-toed,
................................avoided
...................................contact
............................with the horizon
delilah contrapunctal.... yes, that's how I intended to spell it.........
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Alison Cassidy (3/28/2008 11:32:00 PM)
Just caught the double acrostics 'SQUEAL'! Now that's clever.... love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ |
Alison Cassidy (3/25/2008 6:01:00 PM)
You scatter your words over the page like a cryptic mosaic and tantalize the reader with surreal images of visual and aural expression. There is something paradoxical personal as well as comically universal in your poem. 'Wanton and wiggly toed' is my favorite. Amazing! love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ |
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