.... Eyan! The Poet Poem by Eyan Desir

.... Eyan! The Poet

Rating: 3.8


Seated behind the mask
Exploding with emotion
Determination!
Burns around his core
Zealous to be the best
Inspiring, motivating
Hearts, with simple rhymes

Metaphors from his heart
Excretes juices of love
Buckets of laughter
A taste of pleasure
The juiciness of sugar

Not by simple words
Or amazing jokes
He makes mouths laugh
But by the beauty
Twisted around his heart

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Dedicated to Myself
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Also try the man behind the mask

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alen Alexander 05 June 2009

cool, liked it! totally different great theme!

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Indira Babbellapati 05 June 2009

that's some cool objective analysis...hw many secs, this one?

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Sandra Martyres 05 June 2009

I like your idea of dedicating a poem to yourself....thinking poetry out of the box...real cool indeed! !

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 05 June 2009

Dear Eyan, How many mask you are wearing? The best one is to make others laugh.You have done that quite often. Now an auto bahn of confidence that flows like electricitythroughout the poem. Th is is the crux of the feature o f a poet 's self- confidence. The idea of dedicating it to yourself is great. for its fluent transition and poetic expression, you deserve onlyA-10 -Rajkumar

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rago rago 05 June 2009

a fantastic write bibliography.......a confidence filled poem........you are the future...... you are the ray of hope of the future.........

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Lady Grace 23 April 2010

am sure i was already at this page...the poet himself, authored his own words by his gleaming lines, by his passion, kindness and thru these skills i appreciate this poet's ability...ian, hope, this will lead to stardom of fame, , as i see ur eyes, it never surrender to the darkness of the night, ..the shadow of your kindness will always inspire my works.....u r the best, u know that...lavs ya...

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Marieta Maglas 19 July 2009

''Metaphors from his heart Excretes juices of love Buckets of laughter The taste of pleasure The sweetest of sugar'' nice cognitive metaphor, dear Eyan, lovely to read..10+++ from me

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Obinna Eruchie 18 July 2009

It is interesting to read, showing us what goes on inside.

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Janell Cressman 16 June 2009

true Beauty comes from withen, I love your style! your smiple grace, the flow, the words, the way words just pore out and always work. you are good! ! ! ! !

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real good poem keep it up

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