Extraction Ravens ^^^ Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Extraction Ravens ^^^

Rating: 5.0


- The raven has stolen-that?
-Cheese, and what? !
- Raven has stolen... - that?
-Words, and what? !
- Raven has stolen... What?
-Notes, and that else!
- Well, also what? !
-Raven sang a song...
-Well, also what? !
- Raven sang all night long....
- Cheese! Give to raven che-e-e-e-se!

25.10.08.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Had to read this one, T..., as my mentor, and first collection of published writings were all inspired by THhe Accomplished Master of Poetics...Edgar Allan Poe.And aside from John Donne's '''Death Be Not Proud'', '', ...Poe's '''The Raven''', is my all time favorite poem....Your repitition, and rapid sequence query, is a stroke of very fine abstract prose...I like it...You Rock, young lass! FjR '09

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Had to read this one, T..., as my mentor, and first collection of published writings were all inspired by Sdgar Allan Poe...and aside from John Donne's '''Death Be Not Proud'', '', ...Poe's '''The Raven''', is my all time favorite poem....Your repitition, and rapid sequence query, is a stroke of very fine abstract prose...I like it...You Rock, young lass! FjR '09

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 October 2008

Sensational writing.You've potrayed 'Raven' as your subject of profound escapism from boredom and juz lettin the 'raven' fulfillin yer own gap....of missin allies! ! ! Good works Tsira!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 26 October 2008

Nightmare as a raven 'the large black bird' has stolen your words and notes all night long...the cheese 'sweet dream' needed! well done 10

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