Expectaton Poem by sekharan pookkat

Expectaton

Rating: 5.0


Wave less was my mind
Sound less was my sleep
Stone less was my courtyard
And bond less was my life

A buoyant picture
With symbols of partnership
Bunting in my castle
Fell like a corona in my life

The cornet I saw
Was beautiful than ever
And i fell in that wave of light
with sound and bond of expectation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lasoaphia Quxazs 10 January 2013

If you do not expect, everything is a happiness. If you expect and loose, it is not a good feeling. Think about it.

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Valsa George 11 January 2013

When dreams and expectations come to our life, even simple things will assume greater beauty and significance! A beautiful poem penetrating to deeper levels beyond the surface! !

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Indira Babbellapati 11 January 2013

poem of great hope...

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Titi Dale 11 January 2013

Wow, great poem! It has great metaphorical use and is outstanding! Tiegan

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Poetheart Morgan 12 January 2013

The waves brings and takes. Better no wait so long! ! !

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 02 May 2013

When we expect and want something, it never comes out right., even if it happens. That is why I have no more want, but everything, I mean everything what comes to me I give thanks to God, no matter if it is good or bad, so, eventually I find the truth in it, that it was good to me, I needed the lesson.

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Poetheart Morgan 02 May 2013

Poet, you never gives me a feedback? ? I am a human soul, need that! ! ! ! Kisses POET! ! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 18 April 2013

Better to be surprised than to be disappointed! One of the great mysteries of life, do not crave! But how if we desire all that we see. Beautiful Poet

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 13 April 2013

When we stop expecting, taking what comes to us and be happy with it from the heart, then we find true happiness in this life.

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Briana Knight 17 January 2013

Very soft and light. I like it.

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