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Exodus

Trotting over dried up dreams
Familiar terrains swim past view
Again, no looking back!
The unknown stretches far ahead
Behind the hills, muffled cries die down
Leaving soundless echoes in the alley of the ages

Submitted: Wednesday, April 24, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013


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  • David Wood (5/5/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    I sometimes feel I am going round in circles but we must push on going forward in life. A lovely poem

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (5/1/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Without looking back and waiting for the future that's really nice- - -muffled cries die down / Leaving soundless echoes in the alley of ages- - -The beauty of the lines are simply enchanting! Wonderful Valsa!

  • Walterrean Salley (4/30/2013 10:43:00 PM)

    Being reminded of an unfavorable past, though I don't know what's ahead, I refuse go back. Very good.

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/29/2013 12:02:00 PM)

    past as a reference moving into future seeing present...loved the poem

  • Neela Nath (4/28/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    Leaving past turning your face to future! A wonderful poem.

  • Bobby Wynn (4/26/2013 7:30:00 PM)

    Sounds like you left far behind, nice poem, interesting progression, no lookin back.

  • Www.poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 Search 2 (4/26/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    An amazing short poem that unveils the life and its solid truth

  • Kee Thampi (4/26/2013 9:39:00 AM)

    behind a dried hills and lone poetess cry for it...

    Again, no looking back!
    The unknown stretches far ahead....

  • Kee Thampi (4/26/2013 9:39:00 AM)

    behind a dried hills and lone poetess cry for it...

    Again, no looking back!
    The unknown stretches far ahead....

  • David Wood (4/26/2013 7:57:00 AM)

    Dried up dream and a one way trip echo lifes rich tapestries. A lovely poem.

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