Where the love exist without any prediction
There the God exists without any hesitation
When the life exhale with full submission
Then the God inhales with full adoption
When the mind inflames with new creation
And the soul sinks with full devotion
Then the God reincarnates with full entity
And makes the whole phenomenon with full explicity
Where the heart confines with full credibility
There the God dispels all obscurity
And the life flows with full velocity
That can't be stopped by any obtusity.
I quite liked the where/there and when/then dichotomy in your poem. It adds vibrancy and strength to the verses. Very well written, my friend. I enjoyed this very much.
a soothing verse... choice of words or the diction is really effective and fitting with the thought..... rhymes are spontaneous........ and in Susan's language the use of dichotomy....is very powerful to lead a reader to drag to the last word gladly and enthusiastically.......
God exist where love exist, even beyond all emotions statement, He closer when heart is searching...but far when we denying...to me He never gone, but it us that ignore. Nice poem!
Very well said.. Where the love exist without any prediction There the God exists without any hesitation Beautiful write. Where there is love and devotion, life will flow beautifully. I loved each lines.
Where there is love, devotion and absolute submission, there dwells God! When we are ready to believe in His existence, He clears all obscurity and reveals Himself before us in all transparency! Great write, Ramesh ji!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And when the soul sinks with full devotion Only then will man put God to work, for his own good! Thanks for sharing, Ramesh!