Existence Of God Poem by ramesh rai

Existence Of God

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Where the love exist without any prediction
There the God exists without any hesitation

When the life exhale with full submission
Then the God inhales with full adoption

When the mind inflames with new creation
And the soul sinks with full devotion
Then the God reincarnates with full entity
And makes the whole phenomenon with full explicity


Where the heart confines with full credibility
There the God dispels all obscurity
And the life flows with full velocity
That can't be stopped by any obtusity.

Thursday, June 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 12 July 2016

And when the soul sinks with full devotion Only then will man put God to work, for his own good! Thanks for sharing, Ramesh!

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Susan Williams 22 July 2016

I quite liked the where/there and when/then dichotomy in your poem. It adds vibrancy and strength to the verses. Very well written, my friend. I enjoyed this very much.

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B.m. Biswas 23 September 2016

a soothing verse... choice of words or the diction is really effective and fitting with the thought..... rhymes are spontaneous........ and in Susan's language the use of dichotomy....is very powerful to lead a reader to drag to the last word gladly and enthusiastically.......

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Unwritten Soul 01 September 2016

God exist where love exist, even beyond all emotions statement, He closer when heart is searching...but far when we denying...to me He never gone, but it us that ignore. Nice poem!

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Muhammad Ali 03 August 2016

lovely emotions. beautiful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2016

Very well said.. Where the love exist without any prediction There the God exists without any hesitation Beautiful write. Where there is love and devotion, life will flow beautifully. I loved each lines.

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Valsa George 22 July 2016

Where there is love, devotion and absolute submission, there dwells God! When we are ready to believe in His existence, He clears all obscurity and reveals Himself before us in all transparency! Great write, Ramesh ji!

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