Exhale Me Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Exhale Me

Rating: 3.2


I'm floating in a bubble of crystal light
I've left my body down there
if only for a while

I become the clear water drop
falling slow to its destination
suspended in the mass of elements

Oh I stay in this motionless
ecstasy to become it
to captivate what is in the chambers
of my wholeness

Oh rapture convey me
to the endlessness
swallow me into lightness

A string of empowerment
wrap about me
so I will encircle
momentarily
weave me into your arms
~ exhale me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 06 July 2012

Heavenly touch is here in this poem. A transcendental light is getting out.Loved this job, Kasia.

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Simon Collins 07 July 2012

Wow, this poem is pure magic :)

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2012

I agree with Nilakshi. a beautiful poem.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 12 July 2012

simply.....................awesome! ! 10++

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A rhapsodous experience that had me levitating like David Blaine...I like this Kasia..It's chimerical and rhythmic~FjR~

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I lay the wreath of silence on your feet I carry the insanity of love In ewer of my eyes Recieve me Love Redeem me Love

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2012

Lovely poem Kasia, spiritual and other-worldly.

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Kingshuk Chakraborty 07 July 2012

Lovely! A nice work!

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