Execution's List Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Execution's List

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ohh, , on that list

an execustion for whom carry the hot blood of the east
the degnity, the pride, the justice for the least
It was that list, they postponed till after the feast, ,
oh me was on that list..
I was on that list...
the monsters had a mercy not to execute me on my feast...
that list shows how the racists practice their racism toward the east
that list execusted flower of the east by whom never equalize a beast


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 01 October 2009

you are so mtotally insane

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Philip Winchester 03 October 2009

I can read between the lines, Hold tight you may survive. As long as you can Write, You may survive. I think you write well but need to keep control and survive you will.

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Stanley Slavisc 04 October 2009

What grade are you in in elementary school, TaMaRa?

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Queen Dream 06 October 2009

Hi, Where did all the comments I read yesterday go? ? ? ? ? ? I think that I wrote a comment yesterday and soo many other people did too! ! ! If you people keep on deleting our comments then it's better for you to close this site as you want only your nasty comments to appear for every body.

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 08 November 2009

wow such a great choice of words......... very straightforward..... i like it^^ 10++

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

the message is clear Tamara! a nice rhyme and a strong content... 10+++++++ Thanks For Sharing/

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Ahmed Abdalla 29 October 2009

the idea and the expressions are very good, but you could put them together in a better way please check out my poem 'i am my own exorcist'. comments and rates are highly appreciated

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

I can't believe this, racism is a thing in the past although this practice is still alive in some places but it's fading gradually. People of this world had realized already the evils and is counter productive.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 October 2009

It is very relevant in present day scenario. Ten Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems. niv

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