Exactly What I Am Looking For Poem by Diamond The Ninja

Exactly What I Am Looking For

Rating: 4.5


A tall man, with showders very wide
In front of me, black Audi, he offered me a ride
He looked at me, I smiled, he opened up the door,
Exactly what I am looking for.

He smelled so good, It made me weak
It made me hot, it made me sick,
I felt like I could need some more
Exactly what I am looking for

He touched my hand, he talked so sweet,
I shivered hard, my midnight treat
I'll be your best, I'll hit the score cause you're
Exactly what I am looking for

Sunday, December 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: desire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written at Midnight, inspired by Lana del Rey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tywanna Lasley 28 December 2014

Nice

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 28 December 2014

A good one. I like the articulation and penning of the poem. It's a short lovely narrative poem. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success