Sandra Feldman


Evolution Not Revolution


To reach out,
To try to touch the Sun,
All clouds rained out, undone,
To change the doubts,
Cultivating Truth and Love,
That is the Human stuff
A limpid pool, not bluff
For when I was a child,
My parents taught to me,
It's what you do in Life,
What you become and later Be,
That really counts, you'll see.

Submitted: Tuesday, July 02, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Evolution Not Revolution by Sandra Feldman )

  • Bronze Star - 6,050 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/13/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    What you become and later Be,
    That really counts, you'll see.
    Words of wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Valerie Dohren (7/3/2013 3:36:00 PM)

    As we reap, so shall we sow, the law of cause and effect - its what you do in life that counts. Good one Sandra, much truth and wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 652 Points Paul Brookes (7/3/2013 4:00:00 AM)

    A poem of depth and feeling Indeed we're all on the wheel of life and Karma has a way of biting us in the ass if we don't respect ourselves or others. 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/2/2013 2:11:00 AM)

    The wheel turns back and forward: cyclic so no generation gap but onward progress.Yes Evolution. Nice. (Report) Reply

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