Everytime When I Think Of You Poem by lil island Gal

Everytime When I Think Of You

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When
everytime i think of you my body shakes
everytime i see you my knees grow weak and
everytime i'm with you i dont want the time to end.

When
everytime i look into your eyes, i wish i was there
everytime i see you smile my heart melts and
every night before i go to sleep i pray we dont end.

I've tried somehow to say:
you're the sun that lights up my sky
the wind that keeps me cool on a hot summer day
and sweet incense that keeps me on a natural high

I want so much to tell you:
that without you with me each day my day isn't complete
that since day one I've always wanted to be with you
that no matter what's going on in my life
you're the reason there's a smile on my face
and that loving you seems to be all I need to know.

But everytime I want to
the words just wont come out
to you it may sound mushy or too cute
you may not believe it so it's better I keep my mouth closed

Then to try to tell you exactly whats on my mind
yet I wish to tell you that I'm beginning to
love you more with each passing of the day
and that I want to be with you
come whatever may.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 20 December 2008

Beautiful poem. Lil Island Gal!

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 21 December 2008

lil girl has a big heart! ! ! ! ! ! and there is many more love and floating through your words......... nice poem dear.....keep writing

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 21 December 2008

lil girl has a big heart! ! ! ! ! ! and there is many more love and floating through your words......... nice poem dear.....keep writing

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Yaseen Anwer 21 December 2008

composed Beautifully Keep going!

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Reetessh Sabrr 23 December 2008

i lost in the details but got the essence. will read it again with mind's presence lolz all the best

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'You're the sun that lights up my sky the wind that keeps me cool on a hot summer day and sweet incense that keeps me on a natural high' Rachel Ann Butler

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Samreena Lodhi 06 January 2009

ap kafi duur ho........soch mukhtalif hai........great piece of reality

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Joseph Poewhit 01 January 2009

Reads like love is in the air, with the incense

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A wonderful poem and great read

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Man On Fire 30 December 2008

describes vividly the feeling of immersion in the growing emotions of the spring time of a new love. Took me on a wonderful journey to its presence, an excellent piece thank you for sharing I particularly liked the imagery of the laced fingers describes the intimacy of holding hands perfectly. Keep up the good work.

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