Everytime Poem by emily summers

Everytime

Rating: 5.0


Everytime i laugh it off
inside,
it makes me want to cry
because i want this love to be true
i want to be with you
you dont feel the way i do
the way i like you

i waste away inside
and its like my soul has died
i wanted you to know
that my love will never go
my love is genuine
and im promising
that whenever you feel lonely
all you need to do is phone me
because ill be there
no matter where

because i love you
and you know i do
and when i act all slick
thats all it is
i dont care about being smooth
all i care about is you
and i cant take this anymore
i want you to know how i feel
because this feeling is so real

it hurts so much inside
that you aren't mine
but i'll wait
and i'll wait
until one day
we fall at eachothers fate
and we both love eachother
we love one and other
and we know
that this love isn't going to go

Meanwhile i gaze wistfully
i wish you were with me
because...I love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frani Bell 09 April 2007

This poem is so well written! I loved reading it. And yes, i do believe we are feeling the same way. Great Poem. All around 10! !

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David Harris 10 February 2007

Emma, I loved this. I think most of us has fallen for someone at one time or the other who doesn't even know that we are there. Good write. Thanks for sharing and I hope we see some more. David

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Frani Bell 10 February 2007

yea, so i totally know how you feel with this! My poems are along the same form. About someone who u love, but they don't have feelings for you. Very well written

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