Everything Is My Fault Poem by helena dombrowski

Everything Is My Fault

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If your mad at someone else,
you take it out on me.
If your mad at yourself,
you take it out on me.
If your mad at global warming,
you take it out on me.
If your mad at winter dorming
you take it out on me.
If your mad that its hot,
you take it out on me.
and even if its not,
you take it out on me.
if you just don't care,
you take it out on me.
i no life's not fair,
but why,
take it out on me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monkey Mendez 24 May 2008

I wish I could share your pain and take a load off. no one deserves such torture...

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Abha Sharma 23 April 2008

this isn't really fair... the rhyme is good with a soothing flow...loved reading it...

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Sandy nobody 29 March 2008

dont believe everything wrong is your fault..people like to blame others instead of themselves..its easier for them..its not fair..just dont let them get to you..i like this 1..

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Jones Jones 24 March 2008

ah dlg... no one ever said life was always gonna be fair sweetie... but you have taken the first step towards a new day simply by writing this prose... getting the anger and the angst out is a new beginning in itself... nothng much wrong with this piece except do me a favour... change the spelling of elce to else... Jj

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helena dombrowski

helena dombrowski

St. Petersburgh, Russia
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