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RUBAB ATWAL


Everything has Changed


I can never forget when we talked nineteen to dozen
when we laughed and cried together
I believe even you haven't forgotten
but a small change has made the difference
everyday with you was lovely but now it's rotten
I guess you forgot your promises
but you don't even care as
everything has changed.

Submitted: Thursday, December 05, 2013
Edited: Thursday, December 05, 2013

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/8/2013 11:29:00 AM)

    Great poem Rubab, When things changes all of a sudden, it will definitely disappoint one. To be on positive side
    let us think that every changes that comes in life is asking you to take up the challenge and think change is for good and this will make us winner!
    As we cannot stop anything from changing. Loved the way you penned down. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/7/2013 5:55:00 AM)

    I see a trace of disappointment here! Attitudes change! We have to learn to cope with it! Good write! !

    Thanks for your comments! ! (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (12/6/2013 8:47:00 PM)

    A great poem, sometimes people change, sometimes for the better sometimes for the worst. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/6/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    The laughter, the wonderful memories are what matter most. Heartache does not hang around for ever yet precious memories always survive in your heart. Bless you (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (12/6/2013 4:29:00 AM)

    Promises are made at times we feel the bond of relations and once that is gone they are thrown to the winds of time. Your poem, as a true expression scores in authentic rendering and I am giving a clear 10 for it. You have talent...Keep writing... (Report) Reply

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