Everything Ends Now? Poem by Young And Aspiring
Everything Ends Now?
As I choke back the tears...
and forget all of my fears...
I think...this can't be the end...
I hope you know...I love you...
But I was so confused...I had no idea what to do...
All I knew was that I still love you...
I felt so horrible inside out...
Please understand...I need this...
I still cry...
I die inside...
everday....just a little more...
Have you no clue...
YOU do mean everything...don't ever second guess that...
Please believe me...I love you...more than anyone...no one can take your place...
Everytime I look at your picture...your face...
thats something that will never ever will be erased...
You can never be replaced...
Your something more...nothing less...
but I had to confess...
That being alone...
but being with you...
was tearing my insides...out...
Everything here seems to be normal...
I have kept it inside so long...
I felt that my feelings...have been going on...
way to long...
But PLEASE BELIEVE ME when I say this...
...your everything to me....I love you more than anyone could love a person...
But what was inside me..couldn't go on...I need you to understand....I don't want this to end...
But if it must be that way...then I have to let it go...let it be...I never knew you and me...could ever be...but we did...last...and I hope...I prey that...this will never end...
I choke back my tears...
...........and remember my fears.....
once and again, another mind blowing poem of urs, such beautiful work, very deep and i love the repetition from the first versus with that last sentence. the story behind ur 'rhythm of words' reminds me of the something that happened to me, personally, u truly capture the essence of lovin sumone with all being and for that, the feeling of bein cursed by lovers disregard, love this poem, the pain is so beautiful, interesting how pain is quite as simple, but loathed to be experienced. im might sound older but im just 14, so i hope u dont get that its sum elder respondin, lol anywayz u rock and yea...have u heard of incubus? lol bye hun
Cool poemo Amanda All the best and with a record deal soon Roger
wow! idk wat to say about this poem. its amazing. how do you put your feelings into words? how deep to u go until you feel its rite?
This is a very intense poem. It always amazes me how ones can breath so much life into words.
I felt very connected to this poem for various personal reasons and found it very moving. You can portray your emotions in a very forward way which I like
Exceedingly intense and honest as only youth can be. I remember it well. Hope it works out in the end Y and A.
well this is a poem that captures the pain of being in love.n love when u know that u are tuly in it, whereas the other person never will realise wat ur going through...it sure captures the brutal reality of unrepaid love wherin the other person will nver realise it..till ur very end..lovely work...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:44:50 PM # 1.0.0.1119
i really like this poem