Everlasting Things Are Incomplete! Poem by abhilash fraizer

Everlasting Things Are Incomplete!

Rating: 5.0


Dreams, fallen from the stars,
Glistened in your eyes, dear.
They spoke to my soul
Of an everlasting love,
You and I yearned for…
Your eyes once sheltered me,
Your eyelashes fanned my soul,
And taught me to dream
Stars and galaxies…
Holding your slender hand
I swam down the layers of love,
And sailed the oceans of love…
They were the days…
Dreams of fallen stars
Still open their eyes…
But in my memory!
Everlasting things
Are to be left incomplete!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 13 February 2010

Dreams of fallen stars Still open their eyes… But in my memory! Everlasting things Are to be left incomplete! I hope someday the things get complete and be everlasting as your efforts.10/10 again.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 May 2009

Very romantic.........good imagery. well written

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Shaik Zakeer Hussain 05 May 2009

aye well written. Got me back to my school days.

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Joseph Poewhit 04 May 2009

Poem holds much emotion under the surface

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Kesav Easwaran 04 May 2009

good write...the concluding line speaks volume of the emotions inside...inside mind...inside this write... good piecce, Abhilash...thanks...10

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