Ever Than Before Poem by sekharan pookkat

Ever Than Before

Rating: 5.0


Torn brocades
Recalls the melancholy of thoughts
Of golden days with poet friends
Spend together in the blossom valley of poems

The peasant songs of love and betrayal
Were unfair to sing
And the loss and gains were frustrating
Tormenting too

The songs sung perhaps lessened hardships
But the pause between the words
And sighs between the lines
Were trashed none

The tugging sound of whip in the air
Defecated the bridled feelings
Of a poet in bud
Can see the future of dramatic poems

Perhaps it may be the last
but not least
To reveal a dream of acceptance
Ever than before.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 26 May 2013

Poetry is like a rare flower, you always feel lucky when you find one............. Bravo sir

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Poetheart Morgan 26 May 2013

The full love, (the one that fills you) you find only in poetry. The Poetry is the charm of your soul, when you are sure that you love and be loved in return. It's where you find comfort and trust. Is where you found love once and still search for that.

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Heather Wilkins 04 August 2013

true poets have a bonding. there is an understanding of the minds. a good poem

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Soumita Sarkar 10 June 2013

creative minds gel.........but the quest to be accepted is paramount.............nice depiction of a poets yearns..........good.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 06 June 2013

Some friends are near, some far, so the poet friends are really far. One cannot expect to go to the party and drink with them arm in arm. Everybody has their own life to live and in this fast moving world there is no time to say hi over and over again, when they do not even know the other person. Personally I like to see the other person's picture to relate to them. If I do not have that, it is not easy.

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Captain Cur 30 May 2013

Poetry is the balm of the soul. Good thought expressed in this poem.

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Hazel Durham 27 May 2013

To write poetry is to connect and feed our soul with all our innermost thoughts! Excellent write!

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