Evensong: Blue Poem by GORDON GILHULY

Evensong: Blue

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evensong: blue


blue shadows climb the rounded slopes of the hills
like hands modelling the shape of a lover's thighs
shooting stars hurl themselves into the empty spaces
burn up just for the pleasure of it
I hold my eyes open for the light to develop on them
like a photograph

I reach for you whose fingers are a poem
whose blue eyes are as clear as the high note
on a violin
you wear this blue light like a song

I am become the bearer of words that ring like gongs
that tumble like flutes made of human bones
I hold hope between my palms
like the flame of the last match

through the fog in the harbour below
the world continually creating and erasing itself

Monday, May 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2017

Now, that's a love poem! ! !

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2017

It would be an honour, Gordon!

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Gordon Gilhuly 14 November 2017

Thanks, Richard. Good to hear from you again. Do you want to go ahead & post our masterpiece on your page?

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2017

the shape of a lover's thighs fingers are a poem the high note on a violin shooting stars, pleasure, like the flame of the last match All these very fine lines, i collected from your poem after carefully reading your poem. just loved reading it. you are original and so much passion you have in your words... thank you dear poet. tony

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Gordon Gilhuly 14 November 2017

Thanks Tony. Your comments are much appreciated.

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 May 2017

A nice lovely start. Thanks

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 May 2017

Thank you!

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Akhtar Jawad 22 May 2017

I am become the bearer of words that ring like gongs that tumble like flutes made of human bones I hold hope between my palms like the flame of the last match lovely lines of a beautiful poem.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 May 2017

Thank you.

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