Evening Breeze Poem by Paul Reed
Evening Breeze
When the evening breeze
Ruffled the leaves in the half-light
I felt the greatness in the air,
Just standing there;
The quietness absorbed all thoughts
And carried me away to another place
A place where everything was all right
With no need for night;
And in that moment I knew
That everything that had happened,
Or was going to be,
Was down to me, just me;
The breeze carried the sorrow away
Into the clouds that slid over the trees,
Unexpectedly;
And left me alone
The simple and the complex all wrapped in the words of this wonderful poem.Thank you Paul.
a reflective poem of being aware that we alone choose the path we take in life? .............well written PGR.
Sunset and blowing leaves imagery....beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Our twisty evening breeze usually shows up when we want to bbq but you made the breeze sound gentle in your poem- a thought perhaps that came and went..lovely poem..
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful poem with beautiful rendition of words. Thanks for sharing.
, tranquil peace, calmness, aloneness as against loneliness....these are beautiful experience which lifts the soul up to God....... thank u dear poet. tony
The breeze carried the sorrow away Into the clouds that slid over the trees, Dew drops I see someone's tears in you. Such a lovely poem!
The imagery was really brilliant in this poem. Great poem! Congrats, and well deserved! ! 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Such a heartwarming poem....congrats for being selected...Rated 10+++++