Audrey Heller

Rookie - 0 Points (2/28/32 / Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida)

Even Though - Poem by Audrey Heller

Even though, you're far away, my
thoughts, are with you, everyday!
There isn't a moment, where I don't
wish you were still around, to make
me whole again. When I think back,
it was, so wonderful, then! I've really
never gotten over, the fact of losing
you! I had the hardest time adjusting,
but there wasn't anything, to help me
through. I cried everyday and every
night, it took a lot, out of me, but
somehow, I had, to win this fight! In
time, I settled down, a little bit more,
but you'll forever, live on in my mind,
as this, is how it will always be. And
every time, I close my eyes, you're
the first thing I see! To put it very
plainly, I lost you, but in a way, you'll
always be there. Now, I've finally, come
to grips with my emotions and as long
as I live, I'll care!


Comments about Even Though by Audrey Heller

  • Gold Star - 5,561 Points Tiku . (7/29/2015 7:48:00 AM)

    Charged with emotion it is a sweet love poem.Nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 786 Points Kate Lechoe (7/29/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    It is always hard to let go someone we love and care about. Nice poem Audrey. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,738 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (7/29/2015 12:59:00 AM)

    very nice poem. Sometimes certain people leave behind an everlasting impression on our minds and hearts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/31/2009 11:15:00 AM)

    Im so sorry Audrey, I can feel your sorrow too.Be strong and focus dear. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (8/31/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    interesting and wide. Good imagery and language applied! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patrick A. Martin (8/28/2009 8:19:00 PM)

    It's an interesting thing thee are certain people who stay with us I guess for you nad I it's our dads maybe we feel we still need their protection any way I have a lot of empathy with this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (8/28/2009 6:58:00 PM)

    like father, like daughter. a beautiful poem.nice to know about such fond feelings.
    voted10
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 15, 2011


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