**~~even In Paradise Poem by negar shahnouri

**~~even In Paradise

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your last word was a real heart terror
like i was a case for your trial and error

after we broke up, i felt deep love lack
thus i killed myself and cursed you back

Go to hell
Time to yell
wanna see u in allah's jail

yes...
your last word was a real heart terror
like i was a case for trial and error
but in this world i have a great goal
to leave heaven and search for ur soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sara }i{ 05 December 2008

wow it's awsome u really in deep 'u gonna leave the heaven for him' great

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Being in love with Love and searching for it in the the beyond.Very bittersweet.gave you a ten********

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Hassan Almadlouh 25 September 2008

searching for ur soul, , , , i like this part and Allah's jail great words my friend

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 September 2008

Wow! You curse him and again prefer him to heaven! What to say of a woman's heart? ! ! That too of a beautiful woman? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem.....great expresssion....

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 September 2008

'but in this world i have a great goal to leave heaven and searching for ur soul ' lament of a lover.....10

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