Even If...You Can'T Be Mine Poem by lady grace

Even If...You Can'T Be Mine

Rating: 3.9


i conquer the world
through smiles and laughter
by the softness of the words
with the honesty of my heart...

i conquer the world
as the sky hugs the stars
as the ocean raise the pearls
as the sea nourishes corals...

i conquer the world
through advance technology
through texts and phones
through probe and satellites...

i conquer the world
but I never own the earth
i conquer the world
but I never own the universe
i conquer the world
but I never own your heart....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 31 December 2009

That's a very interesting poem well written there are things we cant have I'm learning to live with that... Besides what is of this earth fades with time and we should love what we have.. the most important thing is the love of God

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John Knight 02 January 2010

Lady Grace - Perfect Angel - This is a beautiful poem in structure - perfect flow and perfect meter - perfect linguistic content - I score it a full TEN. V 1 - Lovely ladies - like yourself - do conquer the World with your laughter - softness and honesty. V 2 You are in harmony with our Earth Mother - Mother Nature - (God's loving presence in the whole of His Creation) - hugs - creativity and nourishing these are your joint qualities - V 3 As a wise and wonderful individual - you spead your love and grace throughout the World through electronic communication and we are all blessed by it. V 4 - You show great wisdom the World the Universe belong to God and are under His control - but by you rgenerosity of love and perfection of poetry you do reach our Hearts - for your infinites graciousness we willingly lay them at your perfect feet. An Aewsome Poem - thank You. Love you in poetry - JOHN.

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Nice romantic poem Very interesting to read it Love you in poetry. Great Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Akram Awadat 11 January 2010

romantic poem, well done lady grace 10+

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the meaning to the poem.. is great.

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Miriam Maia Padua 06 January 2010

ouchh....what is life without you? I'd rather have you than conquer all things...lol nicely written, Redlepz regards, Maia

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Eric Roxas 03 January 2010

I found this to be a very confident poem. I hear your voice speaking, a voice of conviction and humility. I am impressed, ma'am! Thanks for sharing! -Eric

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