Even If My Mind Forget Poem by Unwritten Soul

Even If My Mind Forget

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Dont have to say sorry
Because you have to go
Dont keep your heart heavy
Because i want you always be light, be bright
For this whole life and at this hard time

Coming days may keep past years hidden underneath
Still this heart can remember what mind may not
Even a little kindness you did to me
Even my lips never tell you words
My soul will remind
To my heart and mind
My soul will remind
Dont you worry
Dont you worry

Dont have to let go the tears here
Because it made me feel fear
Dont have to say sorry to me
Because kindness dont need apology

Even we are like two distanced hills
Busy river never separate us
Along the flows it green land then people meet
So the bridge will be built
Now between us it be closer

Dont have to say sorry
But take my apology if i cant be there
When you need me but not even my shadow able to
But as you need, my heart will send prayers to travel
That will do more beyond than what my body can do
Dont you worry
Dont you worry

Dont have to say sorry
Because its time for you to go
The ending is not here
It will only be gone when our hearts forgetting
For that i will endure the greatness of missing
Because that is how i feeling you around
Here
There
Anywhere
...with living new surround me

Dont you worry
Dont be sorry
I'll be fine

Friday, December 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The winter is coming, so it does to my poetry... So many things i have in my mind to write, never work that keen to finish them...but these melancholy season has sent me to edge of this unknown feeling. I was there writing a poem but then i stopped..the poem supposed to be here, but i just leave that poem- hummingbird on dying roses- as my friend have sent me a text through whatsapp asking to meet before depart, few other friends soon also have to..years before i maybe dealed this with other feeling but now i am open with it maybe because some of good reasons for them to go or i maybe i just learned and growing up a lot now. I couldnt be happier for them for at last have to comtinue life with new way but at same time departing is a must...because i know its not matter of inches from eyes to see them but inches between heart to feel. So much things i gained for myself from people called true people/friends... True friends are like family without blood that bond. Its not about gene, because no gene ecodes for love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 25 December 2016

'Dont you worry Dont be sorry I'll be fine' short sharp parting liness, feelings cut us short, when words do not adequately express parting feelings

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Unwritten Soul 26 December 2016

I smell a gift from Santa, i'm not celebrating but still i got present! ho ho ho... Sometimes lil words can get us deep... best part of our life is to understand Thank you Terry, dont worry i am fine hahahaha

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Terry Craddock 26 December 2016

that is good, always make sure you take care of yourself, I left your chocolate under the tree, plus a spare in the frig :)

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Johnny Ferrari 16 December 2016

The images used in this poem make the feelings come very much life, Soul. LIfe seems an alteration of coming and going. Love and friendship is carved deep in our hearts and souls. Beautiful poem, bro

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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2016

I appreciate every words from you Johnny. i always feel like even our hearts made of gold, without ones who really appreciate us for who we are, i dont feel what golden feel we may have. As you said love and friendship is everything

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Captain Cur 01 September 2017

Soul, you write with great perception and depth of feeling. The notes you leave after your poems are a type of poetry in themselves. You are absolutely correct, no gene encodes for love. Love is universal.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

Dont have to let go the tears here Because it made me feel fear Dont have to say sorry to me Because kindness dont need apology.. .. yes, where there is kindness, where heart is vast wide open like immense sea there is needn't apology. And so also where there is tear there is possibility of fear. A heart touching poem shared. Thanks.

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Susan Williams 25 May 2017

Dont have to say sorry Because you have to go Dont keep your heart heavy Because i want you always be light, be bright- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A simple expression of love for a friend amd/or family member. What a tender and loving way to say good-by- -be it forever or just temporary. This has the rolling depths of repeating lines that make me think it was written as a song perhaps... that or a whisper of music underlines your verses in a very natural way. Well-done piece, Soul.

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Simone Inez Harriman 30 January 2017

Overwhelmingly beautiful my friend. So emotionally charged with the gentleness of spirit in every stanza.10++

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Rebecca Navarre 19 January 2017

Another Oh So Strikingly Deep! ! ! ! ! With Beauty And Feel! ! ! ! ! Your Words Flow Out So Strong! ! ! ! ! , Reaching Others In Heart Felt Song! ! ! ! ! Excellently Expressed Poem! ! ! ! ! Many, Many 10++++S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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