Even If Broken Poem by Lyn Paul

Even If Broken

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They are no longer
He The Prince
She The Pauper
He feed the children with money
No rules
She un allowed to guide

Just
The Prince
Who happy
The Pauper earned each day
So, He The Prince
Could Sail with the wind
Swim in the sunshine
Sleep with a balanced glass

She was The Perfect
Never wanted
Nor asked
Just got on with the living

The Prince shone
Never heard No
No care in the world

He for years, spent the money
So liked to impress with his gold

He never stopped to think, Why?
Why she lost her way
For he, happy, drinking, laughing
For he, worked a short day

He ruled.
Yet rule no longer
All is ruined.
The drunken gold - Wasted.
Life now turned

So much lost
Never to be found
Broken
The need to know

Life has boundaries
Rules
Even if broken.

The importance of
Guidance,
Respect,
Help. In the steps taken
To assist in
Survival
When Broken



Copyright Reserved. January 30th 2015
Lyn Paul

Friday, January 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: broken,dominance,liberation,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 02 February 2015

Beautiful poem Lyn. Beautiful presentation in few lines......... Life has boundaries Rules Even if broken. To assist in Survival When Broken Life has certain rules to be followed by both to make a good family. Some love to live on their ways, even if they break ones heart. Beautiful poem. Loved it.

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

You both have to be working on the same page and appreciate what each of does. Very thoughtful poem.

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Annette Aitken 25 August 2016

Two people can share the same space in life yet their lives can be so different...nively done Annette

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2016

The need to know. Nice work.

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Hazel Durham 06 February 2015

I love this excellent write about a man who lived his life like a prince, his wife did all the work and obeyed his rules while the prince enjoyed himself but he wasted all his money and he and his wife end up broken in different ways! Deep and powerful write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2015

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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