Ethereal Broken Poem by Unwritten Soul
Ethereal Broken
In my sudden fall
Tried to wake up
Standing with no light
Persona of the darkness delight
Still clouded around my heart
Recall me yesterday ambient night
While I in a fair distance to decide
Heading to lame light in front
Or print my foot backward
Follow the darkness halo
Which direction i should go?
Nightmare revisited
As i seen front not so bright,
I do undo to go and hide
Hiding many scars from being seen
From those eyes that stare
Whenever light strikes on me
So I do undo to go and hide
Conceal my pain to be unseen
And the words that i cant clean
Traces of light in front
Shadowed me at the back
Turning back away from light
As if there is someone i could rely
And i did follow the walk when it moves
Deeper to the road that less light never bright
As i decided not myself to tell but the my dark side
My shadow, follow wherever it goes, wherever it moves
Still clouded in my heart
Is the only darkness with it's charm
My eyes too blind to see without light
Where i found myself drown in black tears
Swimming to somewhere discovering destiny
Where nowhere to go, aimless in estranged sea
Lost in a dreamless sea, be crowned me as an angel
The broken angel that rise from black stained heart
New heart that numb with feelings, and forgotten life meaning
My aching soul
Recalled the past light,
I, I tore my blacken heart away
Dare my ethereal broken to reborn
Free my life by emancipation of my soul
Fly my little soul, with little bright in the dark
To where we were before, when i was waking up
In a distance, between the dark whispers and light source
I shall return and trust on little spark in you again, little bright
Too little to be compared but more than enough to kill the dark
Surrender to you to let light bleaching my stained black heart,
To where we at the point again, and here again to decide
Lead me to there my soul, send me...again
Between the lame light
Or charming darkness wild
Walking to the in front, toward the lame light
Fearless now to show my scars, as it reminds the pains
As reminding the pain, mistakes lesson to learn again
To where i moving now i move toward the lame light
Here, I will decide to where my foot to print it ways
That's how my life to be led in remaining time
With the colors, the beauty i once lost
Spectrum that i denied in the sea
The darkness sea i drown past time
Where my foot to print now on
Trails the marks, left in a new way
By the steps as what my soul says
Stay behind my shadow,
No longer you i will follow
Your shape is always fixed as me
And never me be shaped by you
At the end, it is my very own journey
So let me decide, where my footprints step to
Mistakes will remain as scars
It wont fade and i wont hide
Those eyes can see
Whenever lights revealed on me
If it can be learned by you too
Or telling you i am a survivor
Of life reality tales
My ethereal broken
I chose to follow the light
So my soul, keep my life blue
Oh God, I know you lead me, so true
long and boring..dont say i didnt warn you that hahaha
It was derived from my old style, still it sounds me, Unwritten Soul
The idea of this poem came a year ago but i never completed it until now. So many missing points were gone within in mean time before it got written...what i imagine in this work was
' we at the point between very dark place and a lame spotlight place..
and someone has decided to turn way from the light to hide the scars
but then going to far to be in the dark until he/she cannot see what is he/she heading to until drown in a place, a darkness place, and no place to go just aimless and everywhere is nothing but dark...so he/she breaks the heart and emancipate the soul, that still have light a little to back to the place where he/she decided at first place...as the person follow the shadow of himself/herself to lost in the dark this time this person use his/her soul and mind to control life
and dare to face everything, as with light he/she can see where to go (aim of life) '
in other words, it always not to late to return and fix our broken life as life is always renew in everyday..either we want to redo for better or keep lost in the dark..its us to decide..follow the dark or towards the light_Soul
Learn how to dance again can be after we learn to walk again. great balls of fire.
Without darkness there can be no light, without sorrow no joy but there, like a beacon, is always hope. A lovely poem with great depths 10/10 BB : O)
The darkest hour is just before dawn - emerging from darkness into the light. Great write Soul.
Your agony, dilemma and your conclusion not to yield, to fight back to stay in your brighter soul- - - all are woven skillfully.Love!
Those eyes can see Whenever lights revealed on me If it can be learned by you too Or telling you i am a survivor Of life reality tales My ethereal broken I chose to follow the light So my soul, keep my life blue Oh God, I know you lead me, so true.......touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.
Darkness can surround us at times and it can cause us to lose our way. We may grope for awhile but eventually we will take hold to something that will lead us towards the light. A nice write Soul.
we're on the right track when we chose to follow the light / 'tis an excellent poem! ! ! !
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4/17/2024 11:06:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Mistakes will remain as scars It wont fade and i wont hide Those eyes can see Whenever lights revealed on me If it can be learned by you too Or telling you i am a survivor Of life reality tales My ethereal broken I chose to follow the light So my soul, keep my life blue Oh God, I know you lead me, so true....yeap God examines us by many trials & tribulations, one who faces these with courage & patience, indeed have a right to called hero, a hero learns through trials & considers God a perfect learner.to think over past time again & again increase ur pain more as u said, As reminding the pain, mistakes lesson to learn again.. its our attitude towards situation that ruins our life, not a situation, The broken angel that rise from black stained heart New heart that numb with feelings, and forgotten life meaning wao...great poem as we have a lot to learn t...u r brilliant soul | Delete this message