Eternity Sleep - I Poem by Asif Baloch

Eternity Sleep - I

Rating: 5.0


Life passed away in this
yearn, asif
that someday i will smile too

Alas! Someday
sun will rise with
happiness in its eyes
fading dark clouds of hate
and curing scars of lies

Someday
giggling naughty sounds
will vibrate all around
daffodils will dance on the
songs sung by birds

Someday
I will hold the moon
on the palm of my hand
and swim in dark ocean of
diamonds rubies tray

Huh! Someday
someday

Oneday
I will drown in my own tears
floodout pain which
lives inside
wash away memories of
lonesome heart
and lie in her womb
for eternity sleep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 09 December 2008

if only there was an eternity sleep-- who knows about the future soooooooo live life to its full now in the shadow of the Lord. Forget your woes---theres nothing eternal or eternity, whilst we are on this earth only our good human values count--and our good works. our brother feelings and love for one another. One more nice write from you Asif and ++++++10 regards anjali. (Heres Eid Mubarak to you and your family)

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A very lovely poem. u get 10++...............

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I enjoying your poems so far great work on this piece but I agree with Karin they are sad and depressing but really great poems lol 10/10

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*Trusting You* 13 December 2008

I like how you said you would hold the moon in your hands, where most would say the world. Oneday I will drown in my own tears floodout pain which lives inside good lines... this is a enjoyable read. good job. Becca

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Seema Chowdhury 11 December 2008

very nice and catchy title. enjoyed.

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Vilma Xelin 10 December 2008

I am sure that this 'someday' will come... all I can wonder is how longer will stay... This is the mistery of hapinness/sadness.... Bigger is one, biggest is another... Lovely poem honey! Thanks for sharing! ! !

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Antonio Liao 09 December 2008

a dream of eternity is a dream of life after death...... thank you of reminding me that.....death is an eternity to linger on.....everybody has to under go death in his or own time...... what a lovely poem you wrote....God bless

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