Eternity Ring Poem by Joyce Hemsley

Eternity Ring

Rating: 5.0


Poetic Style - Acrostic:

Eagerly he rushes down to the town
The jewellery store is where he is bound
Eternity's a word, very deep in his mind...
Rapturous delight of the lasting kind.
Never before had he felt quite like this.
Immediate action brought thoughts of bliss.
To place an eternity ring on her finger
Young love and true love ever would linger.

Resting on the laurel 'love lasts forever,
In sickness or health, love is a treasure'
Now was the time for angels to sing
Gentle love songs to an Eternity Ring.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very lovely sentimental rhyme-you desrve my ten*************.if every man could be so romantic-true love is forever. If you get a chance would you please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS.Thank you.

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Shaun William Hayes 19 February 2009

Style - and craft, a sweet verse Joyce.

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Joyce Hemsley

Joyce Hemsley

Portsmouth England
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