Eternity Poem by Heather Burns

Eternity

Rating: 4.5


Chancing not to
fall as timbers

thundering down

crashing to the
ground

but rather as a
petal

floating from a
flower

softly into
eternity.



















eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity

eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity
eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity eternity

Wednesday, December 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stan Petrovich 27 January 2014

Reminds me of William Carlos Williams which is a very good thing!

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Amitava Sur 25 January 2014

Beautiful imagery with an ardent wish to reach towards eternity...... lovely. You may read my poems, My quest and my dream and Power of truth.

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Smoky Hoss 21 December 2013

In the chaos of life (and death) there is still a soft flowing peace that will win out, you've captured the image so well here.

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Flying on the wings of beauty that is both simple and profound!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 December 2013

Fall gently like a flower petal with grace into eternity. Beautiful image.

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