Eternal Sunshine On My Spotless Mind Poem by Sunny Rose

Eternal Sunshine On My Spotless Mind

Rating: 5.0


Eternal sunshine on my spotless mind
Revelation from my silent heart
Triggering life on that shadow
Letting it to breathe through my soul

The echoes are returning from that heart beat
The sound, too familiar, puzzling my heart
Knocking on the door i once locked
But you, somehow, always had the key

The walls vanishes like it never existed
And you're a mirror
Reflecting on that past, so alive
Casting a spell, freezing time

Time only tranquilized the pain
So does it rose, the waves
To let me drown again
And it will never be erased

I will keep on breathing,
Won't ever escaped your prison
For eternity, i will carry
That sunshine on my spotless mind

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A romantic poem. And yes i used the phrase 'eternal sunshine on my spotless mind' it's not that i get inspired by it to write this poem. This is my own.
It's the feeling (both love and sorrow) we get when we see our past lover. We feel that past feeling of love suddenly from our spotless heart and mind and after that you feel sorrow becoz time didn't kill the pain. So you keep on living with that spotless love inside you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 20 September 2012

Really amazing idea..I love this..you do know how to amaze your audience..

0 0 Reply
Aung Si 20 September 2012

Marvelous idea! ! ! I enjoy from beginning to the end.specially, eternal sunshine on my spotless mind is quite beautiful.Sure, we should try to keep on breathing.I love this.well done! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Indranil Bhaduri 19 September 2012

Fantastic...beautifully written...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success