Eternal Spring Poem by C. P. Sharma

Eternal Spring

Rating: 5.0


Through white curtains as I peep into your soul
In the crippling chill of this January winter night
The warmth of your words melts the frozen ice
The silken sound of sweet words behind them
Reminds me of the joys of the eternal Spring.

In the background of white shadow of eternity,
In the warmth of love the icy glaciers melt
The budding leaves bring the hope of new romance
Away from West Virgnia Hills beside Yamuna

Where ecstatic music from Krishana’s flute flowed
Pulling soulful Gopis to Great Divine Dance
With Him as nucleus danced around in madness
Losing identity into Eternal Spring of Bliss

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 23 January 2010

Eloquence in any language or culture.Very beautiful and soul touching. There is indeed a place where the music never ends. Always your friend, Sandra

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Mamta Agarwal 31 January 2010

the title and the beautiful poem, stunning images- very uplifting. written in a meditative state, where one experiences eternal spring and bliss. truly awesome Sir. thanks Mamta

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Sandra Martyres 31 January 2010

Beautiful imagery in this poem - there is a sense of calm and peace in your eternal spring...Lovely write CPS

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Ivor Hogg 31 January 2010

A beautifully written piece Chandra timelessly classical But the Gods decreed seasons to teach us to endure the differences. Eternal spring might be beautiful but would produce no harvest

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Miriam Maia Padua 31 January 2010

really nice thoughts...very divine and captivating... has a very different appeal...so calm soothing.... 10+++ Maia

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Marieta Maglas 10 February 2010

wonderful complex metaphor In the warmth of love the icy glaciers melt wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.. 10/10

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2010

Great imagery in this peaceful soothing piece, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Cheryl Griffith 02 February 2010

Nice piece, I especially like the begining. Very peaceful, musical and full of beauty and desire, one can trully lose oneself here in the fantasy this poem offers. Love it 10

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Indira Babbellapati 02 February 2010

a soothing read..........

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Bonnie Collins 31 January 2010

Enjoyed this very much, and is filled with so much discriptive imagery. I like how you made the reading easy but filled with so much hope, I love the spring, so naturlly I was taken in by the title...... Bonnie

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Bissau, Rajasthan
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