Casey Jarrell

Rookie - 27 Points (6/23/1994 / Deridder, La)

Eternal Snow


Do you know how long it's been since I fell in love with you?
All the time, my feelings heavily grown for you.
Can you notice my feelings for you?
Somehow, I couldn't put them into words.

Just like the winter snow,
falling down quietly until they cannot reach.

Hold me tight- If this is how it feels
to be in love with someone.
I love you- and I've found you.
And so I wish that you could stay here.

Do you know how long you've been clouding my mind?
My sighs are fogging up the window glass.

Can a candle flame melt my frozen heart?

Hold me tight- tight enough to break me
so that in an icy wind or a blizzard,
I won't feel cold.
I miss you- every time I think of you.
Tonight,
we will stay
under the snow.

If there is an eternally falling snow,
could it be my feelings for you?

Hold me tight- if this is how it feels
to be in love with someone.
I love you- this feeling swells up in my chest.
I want to shout to the winter sky
'Can you stay with me? '

Submitted: Sunday, March 31, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 22, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This song talks about a young girl that wants to see a guy that she loves again. She also notices that he is also dead when she goes to that certain place where he lives.

This is also my English version for the original Eternal Snow in Japanese.

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  • Gold Star - 12,422 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/29/2013 11:14:00 AM)

    Young love fills one with exuberant joy. Then sadness when love dies. Beautifully written. Memories always stay with us. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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