Eternal Love Poem by Unwritten Soul

Eternal Love

Rating: 4.5


Childhood is my old home with you
Here, in heart is where you build it
for your love stay last you said
I know it maybe few years
But this sweet memories
Always keep me safe,
shelter my soul again
Protect me from pain
Yes time may flies
No i wont forget
For love you are
This is home
i will ever stay
In anywhere i am
With you, in my heart

O those Innocent days
Missed and now
gone behind
and leave me
alone without you
my dear mom
my dear love
once
and all times

Tears wont cry
water wont flow
Still i do cry
Breeze wipe cold
Times freeze my soul
For a while i stare upon past
returned to your shadows
Silence is a way we talk here
To bring good old smiles
With color resurfacing eyes
Memories recalled
Whispered to me
Like i hearing you
Again and again
A calling voice
A voice
of Yours
sweet
but time has come
and we have to say goodbye
I always try but i never believe it
They may say i lied but to me you not die
But just only unseen by eyes
because in heart
still have you
with me
our perfect home
My sole heart

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicate this writing to my friend, Sunprincess and her late mother.As her mom gone last year on Dec14, And Also dedicate this poem to Kee Thamphi who always live his life with her late mother...This poem dedicate to two of my good friends here...Dears, May God protect us from sorrows and let love eternal...Yes Love is eternal in our home, our hearts. Dear sunprincess my friend, dont cry just believe that your mom is always living in your heart so keep happy so she will feel the same inside and above_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 20 December 2012

On behalf of our two PH pals your appealing write is touching.So nice of you to console them with this wonderful write. True.The departed souls will ever be living in their hearts.

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Valerie Dohren 22 December 2012

Christmas is a time of sadness for many who have lost loved ones - I lost my mother when I was just 16, and my father many years ago too. A lovely poem Soul.

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Hans Vr 22 December 2012

This is such a lovely poem. You are right, my friend the love of the mother lives on in our lives forever. The care I received from my mother, lives on in my heart and I hope it will continue to live on in the hearts of those whom I care for. In that way we eternalise perhaps not the life but at least the love of our mothers. The bitter remembrance of her death, with time, makes place for the many sweet memories she gave to us. IF we can let go of the guilt feeling (all of us did not enough of what our mother liked and perhaps too much of what she didn't like, but if we think about it, truly, a mother forgives her children on the spot without us having to ask forgiveness) , yes if we can let go of the guilt feeling, we will speed up the process a lot to enjoy the sweet remembrance of our mother and leave behind the bitterness. Of course we will miss our mothers forever, but somewhere her love and her spirit is still with us. I thought, while reading this poem, wow, Soul is really opening up here, writing these superb and wonderful lines about his mom, but then I read the comments. It is great to try and console friends with such beautiful poetry. If you can write so touchingly and almost perfectly about someone else's mom, I really look forward to the poem about your own

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Vipins Puthooran 26 December 2012

mother's love is eternal! ! ! ! 'tis a great poem dear soul! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

Part - 2 Dear Soul, you have so nicely presented this poem on account of the death of mother of your friend Sunprincess. It is a great tribute to her mother and nice dedication to Kee Thamphi who always lives his life with her late mother. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

Part - 1 We often remember the memories of childhood how did we spend the time with friends, parents and with brothers, and sisters. Especially the love of mother and her sweet voices are rememberable. When mother's soul leaves body we often feel grief but soul is immortal and it takes next birth. (continued)

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Mj Lemon 12 June 2017

This is amazing, Soul. Childhood is everyone's old home. At some point in life we all return. We all have losses, experience tragedies, and so we may be prompted on that path of return. When we arrive, we find peace and rediscover our perfect home.

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Unwritten Soul 13 June 2017

One of the Greatest thing we may have is to have a spacious heart, this space is to keep other greatest thing, and the best..the ones who we treasured most in our beating life, our family and friends who ever live in our life....something can make a tragedy in our heart, but as it a home for many beloved ones inside...i think it copes for us to heal easier...and to put smile again after cry :) Thank you my sweet friend MJ lemon :)

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Dee Corpolongo 30 September 2013

With the tears in my eyes, which is truly no surprise, , , , my thoughts turn to my MOM, whom I miss all the time... Beautiful poem made for a friend~ with your loving words that you send...being the beautiful SOUL that you are.. with a heart so beautiful to possess.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Touching poem Soul...Really Mothers love is eternal..Loved reading each lines.. Fantastic write...

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