Eternal Fantasy Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Eternal Fantasy

Rating: 4.4


When the two hearts connect,
The distance reduces to nought.
The fog may blur the two eyes,
Not the inner eye of the heart.

When the yearning of the hearts
Sets in motion a silent dialogue,
The process could be mysterious,
And to a miracle may be analogous.

As the dialogue stops, it kick-starts
Monologues of fanciful possibilities.
Capricious thoughts defy flow charts,
And take a flight to perceived eternity.

Forget the submarine cables,
Forget the internet connectivity.
Even when they go to the graves,
They connect through telepathy.


Dhaka
08 April 2014
Copyright reserved.

Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruma Chaudhuri 20 May 2014

Excellent. Forget the submarine cables, Forget the internet connectivity. Even when they go to the graves, They connect through telepathy. You always have an unique idea. The simple things become beautiful through your writing. I like to read your poems very much.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 January 2019

Thank you so much, @Ruma Chaudhuri, for your inspiring comment about me and my poems. 'The simple things become beautiful through your writing' - for an unknown poet like me, a reader's comment like this is indeed a big inspiration. I've just read your poem 'Morning Appears' and left a comment there. Stay well and Blessed; wishing you a very happy new year!

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isabella Francis 18 April 2014

Amazing... what does one require more than to be with their love...

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Khairul Ahsan 31 December 2018

Thank you, @isabella Francis, for reading my poem and leaving a comment behind. I agree with you, one doesn't require anything more than that.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 April 2014

that will be great if possible.liked it.keep inking.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 December 2018

Thanks, @Anil Kumar Panda, for reading my poem and appreciating it. I've just read your poem 'You Must Sleep in Peace' and left a comment there.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2014

We always have a connection. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 December 2018

Thank you too, dear poet @Tirupathi Chandrupatla, for stopping by and leaving an appreciative comment here. I've just read your spiritual poem 'Firmly Established' and left a comment there.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 10 April 2014

Well written! Enjoyable! I liked the poem..

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Khairul Ahsan 26 December 2018

Thanks, @Mallika Achuthan Menon, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment. I've just read your poem 'Sorrow' and loved it too.

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