Eternal Bliss Poem by Kavya .

Eternal Bliss

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Time is fleeting
like a sand escaping from our fist,
We have no control over it
Enjoy every minute!

Relations are sensitizing
Blood is thicker than water,
Do not react in an angry situation
Learn to value blood relations!

Happiness is slowly vanishing
Take time to smile,
Be happy for this moment
This moment is your life!

Friends are diminishing
They have now place only in our contact list,
Make time to meet them, laugh with them
Friendship is a sweet responsibility, never an opportunity!

Marriage is now become like a contract
With less of understanding and more of ego
It's a sacred institution, a divine bond,
Preserve it!

These are all God-given gifts
Our attitude towards life is what we need to shift,
If properly cared and nurtured
Can work wonders and give us eternal bliss!

Friday, October 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Valsa George 21 October 2015

You have made a very mature observation of life and laid down the golden rules to make it happy and enjoyable! Problems will come into life. What ever Fate decrees, we have to oblige and cannot change, but our attitude to life, we can change! With a positive attitude, we can surely reap bliss! The lines I love are; Friendship is a sweet responsibility, never an opportunity! ........................................Enjoyed the poem Kavya and thanks!

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Kavya . 23 October 2015

Thank you so much for your sweet comments Mam as always!

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