Eternal Poem by Paula M. Puddephatt

Eternal

Rating: 4.8


I draw their spirits close to me and breathe,
and still I find, there's something to believe.
I need their energies to make me strong.
I hear the subtle echoes: Samhain's song.

Nobody feels my reason - hears my rhyme.
My rhythms only work in my own time.
My words - they might make sense in my own mind.
My friends need other words - ones I can't find.

There is an angel buried somewhere near,
who told me that there's nothing left to fear.
Now, all my friends who've passed or gone away -
this is one life. What more is there to say?

In this one life, I'll mend what I can mend.
True friendship is eternal - has no end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonathan Carter 10 February 2014

This tells a great story in my mind. Great piece.

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Bill Cantrell 10 February 2014

Very nice indeed! Lines 4-7 reminds me of a poem I wrote- Poetic Diaglott. I really enjoyed reading this

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