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Tim Vallie

Rookie - 2 Points (12/13/1990 / Duluth Minnesota)

Escape to a Place Sublime


Sitting here in solitude
Alone inside my mind
I need a bit of altitude
Need to feel that high
Escape from all reality
If only for some time
Leaving this normality
For a place sublime

Submitted: Sunday, March 09, 2014
Edited: Monday, March 10, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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  • Rookie - 8 Points Thomas Vaughan Jones (3/9/2014 2:54:00 PM)

    Minimally exquisite. This is the language which lifts poetry to a place of elevation. Just one tiny polish please. Because it has such a fine tone, this line needs attention.

    I need a BIT OF altitude.

    I need a LITTLE altitude
    takes it up one more level. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,285 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/9/2014 2:09:00 PM)

    Great poem, I identify with it one hundred percent! My feelings exactly.
    Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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