Tim Vallie

Rookie - 3 Points (12/13/1990 / Duluth Minnesota)

Escape To A Place Sublime - Poem by Tim Vallie

Sitting here in solitude
Alone inside my mind
I need a bit of altitude
Need to feel that high
Escape from all reality
If only for some time
Leaving this normality
For a place sublime


Comments about Escape To A Place Sublime by Tim Vallie

  • Silver Star - 3,671 Points Valerie Dohren (3/16/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    Short, but very well expressed - the need to escape from the realities of this world. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 23 Points Thomas Vaughan Jones (3/9/2014 2:54:00 PM)

    Minimally exquisite. This is the language which lifts poetry to a place of elevation. Just one tiny polish please. Because it has such a fine tone, this line needs attention.

    I need a BIT OF altitude.

    I need a LITTLE altitude
    takes it up one more level. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,092 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/9/2014 2:09:00 PM)

    Great poem, I identify with it one hundred percent! My feelings exactly.
    Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 10, 2014


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