Escape Poem by Maren Louise

Escape

Rating: 5.0


Escape, Transformation, Renewal,
These are the gifts your friendship brings,
And what is life without these things?
Stenching, stagnant, like a rotting carcass,
Without you in my mind and heart,
I whither and decay,
Thank you dear friend,
For saving me from myself,
Breaking me free,
Unlocking me from my own shackles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Fantastic! Friendship is a fantastic fource!

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Gordon Wilkinson 10 May 2009

friendship is indeed a beautiful gift - 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 03 May 2009

All wants to escape, even if means jumping from frying pan to the blazing fire, Eric Hoffer.........Good Write...........

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 17 November 2008

A thankful message to a dear friend, said sweetfully. gratitude is the memory of heart! ...and that also, for a friend. Write more!

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 September 2008

A clearly personal passionate writing that comes through. I recommend this as an example to others. GW62

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