Equinox Girl Poem by Mandira Mitra

Equinox Girl

Rating: 3.5


Fall-winter girl,
Sparkling, wise
Words trail off
Fashions capsize
Kinesthetic, her eyes
Evoke snowflake moments
Of past mall-winter skies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shuchismita Mitra 24 September 2006

P.S. Flattered, but can't agree with the 'wise' bit...

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Shuchismita Mitra 24 September 2006

Dear Mandira Time and timelessness so seamlessly fused together... you give meaning to my pasts and presents... And my words do really always trail off :) ... as now... Thank you

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Syed Ali Sagar 24 September 2006

Well Done Mandira, Feel Sensation of movement in meaning.Strains-With your pen or thoughts..? While reading your poem word of sun crosses the plane of the readers(earth's) equator.Do you feel reality of day and shadow of night are of equal length while writing 'Equinox girl'-Yes! Something like Maya and Mitra -Syed Ali Sagar

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Catastrophe King 24 September 2006

I admire the way you have chosen your words.. but, 'Kinesthetic' is new to me though.... The flow is smooth and the title apt. I am in an awe of your style!

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