Envious Whispers Poem by Ali Farah

Envious Whispers

Rating: 5.0


On a bright day morning
A loser wakes up early
Suffering from a low self esteem
In a gloomy state of mind
Insecure of his dreadful fate 
Desperately seeking relieve
In need of a company to keep
To lessen his agony a bit
Endeavors to defame a character
Starts his whispering messages
Rumors snowball rapidly
Till it paints a clueless victim
With a new stained face
The loser's day is done
Proud of the accomplished task
Mindful his intended target
Is dragged down to infamy
To his lower level of misery

Wednesday, January 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: envy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Rumors starts with a cycle triggered by an insecure person with low self esteem who measures his success with the company he keeps. His efforts are geared to pull down everyone to his level of misery.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmed Abomahfouz 11 February 2014

you painted a low self esteem image with a talented dark colors..it is true that low self esteem is an opening door to depression.. although this is negative thinking but writing and reading it gives a relief from such thoughts + 10

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