Enlightenment Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Enlightenment Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Lightning strikes deeply

storming the inner core roots

changing the tree's shape

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 10 September 2008

no doubt, , , , , , , , , thanx

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Mamta Agarwal 05 November 2008

enlightenment couldn't have been better expressed 10 when you get enlightenment, you are a changed person. Mamta

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Reshma Ramesh 28 October 2008

perfect...........need i say more..........

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Chitra - 23 September 2008

A prolific write, the tree of life being shaped by the lightning of ups and downs

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 September 2008

the think with haiku is its so difficult to make it profound and succint at the same time...this piece is a perfect example of how it can be done.excellent!

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Monika Marie 15 September 2008

Perfectly put. And how this can relates to mankind/life is even more perfectly composed. Very nice.

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