! Enlighten Me, Please Poem by Linda Ori

! Enlighten Me, Please

Rating: 2.9


How exactly did this happen?

You come to me after all this time
Ripe with emotion and passion -
The universe explodes with wonder
We are infused with its magic;

No need for words any longer
There are no words, only sensation
Caught up in the splendor of the moment -
Primal need, hunger, lust.........love?

You read my mind with your body
We need only to act and react
Souls connecting with every breath
You breathe me in;

No longer two separate entities
Together we flow into one
Pleasure and passion now double
Energies fused in the fire.

Can you explain this phenomenon?
This thing that you do to my soul
I'm wondering how did this happen.................
Enlighten me, please.

7/3/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Man on the Moon 03 July 2008

I'm glad I read this. Very good

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Kesav Easwaran 03 July 2008

'No longer two separate entities Together we flow into one...' sincere love, glorified here...good enjoyable write, linda...

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But L, we rely on YOU to enlighten us; and you have. That old cliche about two people not even needing to speak because they knew what each other is thinking and feeling.... some find it tedious... I find it beautiful. t x

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Thad Wilk 03 July 2008

Great read Linda! You certainly have explained love, its all there written, in your Poem above! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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James B. Earley 05 July 2008

My friend its simply part of the human condition!

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 August 2009

This is a very passionate write indeed.. Hey this is a work of a true poet..... I don't have that much experience so I m not in a position to enlighten you Linda.. Yet there has to be that chemistry isn't it? .. this is a very nice write.. I enjoyed this one.. good one to relax my mind.. with love shan

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Meggie Gultiano 16 November 2008

yes, and i agree with Ivan.Thanks for this sharing. Love, Meggie

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 September 2008

...astonishing thoughts/verse beautifully expressed.........10

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Ivor Hogg 13 July 2008

If the time is right and the chemistry is right you have no choice Nature takes control

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 July 2008

This one is a focused in topic. That is always good. Prose writing has a way of taking your focus and altering it. You have to keep bringing it back. I thought you did that well. I never lost the track. GW62

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