Enjoy But Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Enjoy But

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Until wishes are confined
You are certainly defined
As good person and gentleman
Caring and recognized as best human

But leave no hope till achieved
If fate is to be believed
Lust is part of human feeling
If that comes from soul with willingness

Enjoy but with caution
Take enough of precaution
Do not venture into field
That is lying as already filled

Make your “wish horse” to go around
Hunt for prey if it can be easily found
No harm in trying for easy targets
You were so far failure and now getting late

You are no more undesired person
You have logic with reasons
No desire should be left unfulfilled
As it is human mind that has to be filled

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

Until wishes are confined You are certainly defined

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

Erin Mayeaux4 minutes ago Ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

thanks for the poem Clinton Siegle25 minutes ago keep writing, and thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

Enjoyed..and Bethany Finseth21 minutes ago is this directed to the reasoning behind a critique. I don't know, I'm probably way off. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago no it is addressed to confused poet. in best possible way

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

Intriguing... Sarah Brown3 minutes ago everyone has feeling but also the mind Comment +1 Do waste your life trying to get the hardest goal, without first tasting some sucess 35122

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

Steven Gress2 minutes ago Nice poem of hope for obtaining some sucess without failing miserably. Thanks for sharing. Comment +1 A didactic rhyme

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2013

bijay kant dubey2 minutes ago The goal of life Comment +1 Its ok

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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