Enigma Poem by Sebsibe Bade

Enigma

Rating: 5.0


Throwing my eyes on the joyful ocean
Playing with the rhythm of its lines
Suddenly felt I the cold drops in my heart
Dripping like uninterrupted sighs
I asked myself:
Nature is beautiful
Alas! The world is ugly
Beauty fighting vanity
Chastity competing atrocity
E v e r y w h e r e!
The dual factor reigns
Over the planet
Battling for its own sakes
To ensure future's fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 26 October 2009

Right thinking...right writing....God bless

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Bravo, talented poet! more than great! ! ! really I enjoyed it! ! ! nice flow and fine fit… I asked myself: Nature is beautiful Alas! The world is ugly --> brilliant verses… I gave you 10

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Emancipation Planz 11 August 2009

Sebside, Welcome to PH... I enjoyed that within your eyes of oceanic depth you bopped out... 'Playing with the rhythm of its lines...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 August 2009

Fine wording! Travel within and and truth disclosed amazingly! 10+

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