Endless Wait Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Wouldn't the world be a wonderful place if all could and would heed these words.

Poem is voicing things in prose pattern.....................there is more of prose quality in the poem than poetic beauty...............Wish the same issue could be written in more subtle and rhythmic manner of a poem with imageries and poignant picture suggestives...................The basic difference I feel between poem and prose is the difference between scolding and cajoling...............poetry like a sweet granny make a child do a things whereas prose like a stern mother asks a child to obey......................thus poetry is more soothening and more effective...............................................since it touches the subconscious subtle feeling and emotions beneath.............Hope my suggestions are read with a positive heart.

deep, and true, thank you!