**********endless Infinity***********************1978 Poem by louis rams

**********endless Infinity***********************1978

Rating: 3.3


i thought of you all day
and time just seemed to slip away.

i wanted to pick up the phone and call
for next to you is where i belong.

if given the time i would surely be
making love to you endlessly.

making you forget all your troubles and woes
that life has built up for you to hold.

although i may not have much to offer you
when it comes to monetary things
there is one thing that i will always bring.

my sincerity and my feelings for you
is as infinite as the sky is blue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 June 2010

‘my sincerity and my feelings for you/is as infinite as the sky is blue.’…the zing thing for ‘emotional-union’…to make it bubbling and sparkling...else are but stale…insipid…zero emotive value…and you’ve caught the vibe vibrantly …well tailored poem Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2009

although i may not have much to offer you when it comes to monetary things there is one thing that i will always bring. my sincerity and my feelings for you is as infinite as the sky is blue....AND THIS IS GENERALLY NOTASKED FOR FROMA FRIEND.... ITIS GRAACEFULACTIFTHAT IS OFFERED ANDREALISED....10

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