Endless Ecstasy Poem by June FeirCruz

Endless Ecstasy

Rating: 5.0


I dared to dream of you
In my darkest hour
In my time of self doubt and pain
I dared to dream of you

I dared to dream of you
Let down my guard
Show you my nakedness
My pride and humiliation

I dared to dream of you
Show you my soul
I took the leap of faith
To be found vulnerable

And now, I'm in suspended animation
Feeling endless ecstasy
You have finally found me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 14 April 2009

This is a very well written and expressed poem, June, and I enjoyed reading it quite a bit. It tells a story that just about anyone in love with someone from a distance may have experienced themselves, and does so beautifully. However, that feeling of vulnerability and seeming humiliation must be weighed against the chances of acceptance and your love being recriprocated. It is a risk, to be sure, but one that should not be afraid to be taken. Hopefully, you will indeed find ecstasy! Carl.

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Les Derbyshire 04 April 2009

We cannot truly find that 'other' without risking something, exposing ourselves, being prepared to give of ourselves but when we do... we experience such ecstacy. Beautifully captured as ever June, thank you.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 October 2008

truly in love, we let down our mask, share ourselves completely. endless ecstasy, you are a true romantic, June.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 September 2008

Hey congrats to you June.Hopin it gonna last furevar! Nice writes.

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Junior Pocoloco 11 September 2008

I like poems like yours. This one will get me to see your other works. Very well done.

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