Empty Space Poem by Hazel Durham
Empty Space
Magic happens when were together,
Like wind and rain on our windowpane,
The sound of our sweet love,
Coming from the mystery of the skies above,
Stormy seas rage against our past troubles,
Then sunshine makes our dreams double,
Its rays highlighting our zest, as a middle aged couple,
Walking on a winding road, having our own secret code,
We dance when thunder and lightning strikes our abode.
Falling in love is like an endless, sparkling waterfall,
With hidden gems,
Glistening in our desires that have ears to listen,
To our heartbeats and lifes defeats,
Wandering around our sometimes desert souls.
We are afraid of the lonliness of growing old,
Leaving our loved one behind,
Like a cloud without rain,
Like the sun without light,
Like day without night,
Like a mountain without any height,
Like a magician with a vanishing dove,
That never returns,
All thats left will be an empty space,
That will be filled with love,
Like water in a timeless, tranquil lake,
Heartbeats connecting eternally,
In the elements of nature's last take,
That will sing its haunting song for our hearts sake.
Yes, magic happens when two hearts are in love! Leaving the loved one behind is the greatest agony, true lovers can ever feel! You have depicted love with two hearts beating as one in all its beauty and agony! !
Nothingness magnified. Well penned dear poetess. Top score.
Magic happens reading this wonderful poem once more. Like a cloud without rain, loved emotion does magic. In the elements of nature's last take, tranquil lake speaks more. This poem is excellent poem.
Like water in a timeless, tranquil lake we feel light of mercy of God eternally. Then sunshine makes our dreams double. Song of heart we hear. Coming from the mystery of the skies above light of hope does magic. A brilliant and interesting poem is very well penned and shared.10
You have turned a daunting subject into a thing of beauty Hazel. You have created a deep love poem with strong words and powerful lines. Definitely one of your best.......Kudos 👏
The rhythms you create here are wonderful and the metre, if read out loud and properly, flow like silk or a waterfall you have such a lyrical style 10/10 BB : O)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 10:38:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a good write about empty space, the in between times which we all have a lot of. nicely written with good imagery.