Empty Life Empty Lie Poem by D.J. Ray

Empty Life Empty Lie

Rating: 4.8


the sun shines down on a empty lake
swimming deeper a drowning brake
no more empty no more hate
gonna die its only fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miss Rainbow 10 June 2010

thats true your fate has to already be up in order for you to die because if yur not ready then ur not ready

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Monique Sapla 27 March 2010

this is a very powerful poem in those few lines. well done 10 :)

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D.J. Ray

D.J. Ray

Jonesboro AR
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