Empty Hours Poem by ramesh rai

Empty Hours

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I feel anguish
due to my empty hours
when my mind does not allow
to think any more
I can not sketch
even a single line
on the paper of my heart
like in desert
rose never bloom
no beetle come
to suck the nectar
only hot wind blows
making my life
like the desert

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 26 July 2013

Not even inspiration comes to our empty hours; a vacuum nothing can penetrate.But somehow, anguish finds its way in. But it was not one of your empty hours when you wrote this powerful poem!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Beautiful poem felt by many of us. sometime where, in some part of our life, we may feel we are travelling through desert. But let's keep on crossing the desert hoping this desert will too end and we enter the beautiful world full of greenery. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Savita Tyagi 17 August 2014

It is something felt by all writers. Expressed beautifully even empty hour has brought a lovey poem.

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Dinesan Madathil 27 July 2013

In these vacant phases of life let us recoil from the self and reach out to the vast world around us.

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

sometimes empty hours are necessary for us to rest from all the stress.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 July 2013

Some empty hours are needed to compensate for hours that are filled with noise. Nice poem.

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