Beach Girl


Empty Heart


Powdery and white dry grains
Softly sifted through my hands

Flinging sand up in the air
Whirling winds blew all away

I raised and gazed out to sea
And heard a distant whisper

I waded out into the surf
Stood curious and waiting

Cross miles and miles of endless sea
I heard you call my name

You strode into my empty heart
And found that it was vacant

Your laughter filled up every room
Left smiles in every corner

One day I hope to touch your face
And look into your eyes

Until that time, I'll only dream
Of emerald isles and you

Submitted: Thursday, September 05, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,995 Points Bri Edwards (12/12/2014 6:19:00 PM)

    sorry about the smiles. i'll come over tonight and clean those up. bri :)

    p.s. i would be looking in my inbox and at my poem comments, BUT could not access them. but i COULD access my favorite poets, and you are one of them. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,360 Points Mr. Nobody (3/11/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    As they say on the street:
    Amor de legos es amor de pendejos!

    Love is everywhere, open up and take some! ! ! !

    keeping putting your heart on paper, you do it well! ! ! full of FEEL! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points V P Mahur (3/2/2014 2:17:00 PM)

    dear Beach
    this one is a lovely song full of love feelings
    Thanks for a nice musical note
    I invite you to read my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Suman Kumar Das (12/2/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    My heart got brimmed with love after reading such spectacular song.............................. liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Sekharan Pookkat (9/25/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    A lovely romantic poem- I like the following lines very much
    Cross miles and miles of endless sea
    I heard you call my name (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,318 Points Patricia Grantham (9/19/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    I really and truly enjoyed this romantic and soothing
    write. I hope that the dream of love will come true.
    Great expressions. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,300 Points Ken E Hall (9/19/2013 7:08:00 AM)

    Without dreams we have nothing, the poem reaches out to fill an empty heart...luvli! regards and thank you I shall return. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Jodie Hardy (9/5/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful, Lovely flowing and light poem, I hope you find the person of your dreams xx (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,059 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/5/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    emptyness I like, I know emptyness means fullness, thanks. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote if you pleased. (Report) Reply

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