Beach Girl


Empty Heart - Poem by Beach Girl

Powdery and white dry grains
Softly sifted through my hands

Flinging sand up in the air
Whirling winds blew all away

I raised and gazed out to sea
And heard a distant whisper

I waded out into the surf
Stood curious and waiting

Cross miles and miles of endless sea
I heard you call my name

You strode into my empty heart
And found that it was vacant

Your laughter filled up every room
Left smiles in every corner

One day I hope to touch your face
And look into your eyes

Until that time, I'll only dream
Of emerald isles and you


Comments about Empty Heart by Beach Girl

  • Gold Star - 10,468 Points Bri Edwards (12/12/2014 6:19:00 PM)

    sorry about the smiles. i'll come over tonight and clean those up. bri :)

    p.s. i would be looking in my inbox and at my poem comments, BUT could not access them. but i COULD access my favorite poets, and you are one of them. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Mr. Nobody (3/11/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    As they say on the street:
    Amor de legos es amor de pendejos!

    Love is everywhere, open up and take some! ! ! !

    keeping putting your heart on paper, you do it well! ! ! full of FEEL! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (3/2/2014 2:17:00 PM)

    dear Beach
    this one is a lovely song full of love feelings
    Thanks for a nice musical note
    I invite you to read my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/10/2014 12:02:00 AM)

    'You strode into my empty heart
    And found that it was vacant' - So cute! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Suman Kumar Das (12/2/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    My heart got brimmed with love after reading such spectacular song.............................. liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,807 Points Sekharan Pookkat (9/25/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    A lovely romantic poem- I like the following lines very much
    Cross miles and miles of endless sea
    I heard you call my name (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/22/2013 8:15:00 PM)

    a nice rhythmic poem..loved it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,897 Points Patricia Grantham (9/19/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    I really and truly enjoyed this romantic and soothing
    write. I hope that the dream of love will come true.
    Great expressions. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Ken E Hall (9/19/2013 7:08:00 AM)

    Without dreams we have nothing, the poem reaches out to fill an empty heart...luvli! regards and thank you I shall return. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,350 Points Unwritten Soul (9/18/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    Nice and left me feel so much thing to say but just cat utterly said_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/10/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    'Until that time, I'll only dream
    Of emerald isles and you'
    So sweet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alec Latha (9/9/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    yeah girl nice one reach that face (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (9/7/2013 8:24:00 PM)

    it can be read on the tapped beat...beautiful rhythm! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points Cassandra Jasmine (9/5/2013 7:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem! Light and airy, yet descriptive. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Jodie Hardy (9/5/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful, Lovely flowing and light poem, I hope you find the person of your dreams xx (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,574 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/5/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    emptyness I like, I know emptyness means fullness, thanks. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote if you pleased. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013


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